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The house is very strange, old and broken, but still no one knew why it was abandoned and no one will ever know why, so it is just left there in the middle of a forest, still standing there without rotting away or falling down to pieces.
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The abandoned house
Oliver 4Maple
There was a house in the middle of the forest, it was very old and broken. No one knew why it was abandoned, and next to it was an old rusty car. Some people thought it was left by the owners, some others thought there was a fire, some people even thought it was a haunted house! But no one knew why it was there and what happened to this abandoned house and car.
When you looked at it it was all rusty and broken, the windows were cracked, there were holes in the walls and there was no door to get in, it wasn't there...Inside the beds in the rooms were broken and dirty, the sofa had a big hole in it and the lights wouldn't work at all. The kitchen was filled with rotten and gone-off food, and it looked like the kitchen was all burnt. The toilet was like you were in the sewer because of how dirty, old and broken it was, and the water from the toilet was all over the floor.
The car was rusty and broken, strangely the radio was still working but it was all muffled and it wasn't working properly. The car windows were cracked and there was mould inside the car and all over it, how much mould there was and how old it was made you VERY sick. And there was moss on the inside too and the seats were ripped.
In the house there were animals everywhere, there were rats, cats and other rodents. It was filled with horrible disgusting rats and mice. There were cats that were horrible. There were also loads of creepy crawlies, like spiders and cockroaches. It was filled with animals.
