Some of the outstanding writing from our school!

Good day everyone,

Here are some lovely pieces of writing that have been sent to me over the past few weeks.

Keep up the good work!

Mrs Marshall

Alexandra 5Ash

On a silent day through the enchanted pathways there were rocks and pebbles, all separated from each other and in their caves the trolls were sleeping but one of them was awake. His name was Steven. He decided to go and explore outside of the enchanted jungle and so he went. Nothing happened at first but then Steven encountered a fierce tiger, he didn't know what to do but then the tiger ran away. Steven thought since he is a troll he can scare away any fierce animal. After a while, He decided to go back to the enchanted forest. Steven quickly walked across the stones trying not to make a sound.

When Steven got back inside the cave he was a bit hungry so he decided to make some gummy bear snail soup. It was a original at the enchanted forest he had it or dinner every day but today he felt like having it for breakfast. So first he poured in some fresh lime gummy bears(Stevens favourite flavour) and then went outside to pick up a few snails. After he came back inside he had everything in the bowl ready he just had to smash and stir the soup a bit

Right before he took a spoon full of the soup he heard someone outside, Steven or any other trolls ever get visitors in the morning.  Since Steven was eleven years old now he went to go see who it was.Turns out it was just a tiny elf but the news wasn't so good.  The elf(Olaf) told Steven that tonight there were going to have danger come. And how did Olaf know this, its because the danger that comes(Ogars)they come every ten years and the last time Ogars came it was only when Steven was a baby so he has never heard about it before. Now that all of the trolls have woken up they all got prepared for the battle because they already knew what was going to happen.

As night approached, Steven wasent old enough to help yet so he had to stay in the cave, but he wasent all alone, he had some of his friends with him so they played tick tac toe.

At ten o clock the Ogars were here they broke the door open and started their battle…

Marlie 3Palm

Thump! He slammed his enormous, grass covered foot into the middle of the road, sending shockwaves of dust and debris in all directions.

With a loud grunt, the troll wrenched the entire fully tiled roof off a nearby holiday home, with the owners peering helplessly out of the downstairs windows. He didn’t mean any harm, but he just couldn’t help himself - he needed to find his baby.

 Pupu the troll had lost his baby and was looking everywhere.  He woke up in the dangerous forest and there was no sign of the baby not even her clothes.   He went to look for her in the dirty dust bin, the stinky swamp and a near by city.  The baby was 2 years old her name is Dudu.  She would be so scared  all alone.

He ripped 1million roofs off of houses but still didn’t find Dudu. He then looked for her in the forest and in the dump because she liked to take things from the dump to keep in her bedroom. But she was not there.   

Pupu sat on a grey rock and cried.

Suddenly Dudu jumped out from behind Pupu and scared him so bad and she was grounded for 1 year.

Livia 3Palm

Joel 4Birch

My Dream story

A sandy blue lagoon, quiet in the hawaiian countryside, with bamboo shacks and tropical fish, far out waves and surfers everywhere. Sand dollars, seashells and salty seas.

I grab up my shovel and dig down deep to find old watches, broken car keys, phone cases, plastic scraps and old bits of boat, but these are not the treasures I'm looking for. I continue until I hit something hard ‘thud’, my shovel breaks, I have found it!

A massive old rusty and rotten wooden chest.

I go back to my hut and get the rope and tie it around the handle on the chest. I tie the other end to a tree so it doesn't slip down the hole. I grip tightly and heave the heavy oak mass from its deep trench - it stinks of fishy stagnant water. With the nearest rock I can find I throw it against the lock and it blows open revealing the items to the air for the first time in hundreds of years.

Blackbeard's captain coat, his ruby encrusted dagger and the map to his long lost ship The Queen Anne's Revenge. I reach inside the pocket of the coat and find a golden pocket watch. I look at it closely and see its inscribed with CC and the date 1492 on the back. I realise what it is - it's the property of Christopher Columbus the voyager himself! I feel nervous and scared inside that I might be cursed for digging up these forgotten valuables… I look around and see the beach is empty, the water has come in and I am stranded.

Rafferty 3Palm

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